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Re: Roll in the Grass and Stare at the Sky
Thank you so much for the feedback!
Jun 13, 2020 -
Re: They Say When You're 16
Thank you so much for the feedback! You're totally right; there is a lot of telling in this poem. I will try and fix it.
Jun 13, 2020 -
Re: Everyone Likes Macaroni and Cheese
Thank you so much for the feedback! I really appreciate it.
Jun 13, 2020 -
Re: Why Do We Hate Ourselves?
Thank you so much for the feedback!
Jun 11, 2020 -
Re: Why Do We Hate Ourselves?
Thank you so much for the feedback! I really appreciate it.
Jun 10, 2020 -
Re: Everyone Likes Macaroni and Cheese
Thank you for the feedback! I really appreciate it.
Jun 10, 2020 -
Re: Compartmentalizing
That's interesting. I had no idea what compartmentalization is. Your poem makes a lot more sense now that I realize that.
Jun 9, 2020 -
Re: Prince Charming
Thank you so much for the feedback! I'm glad you enjoyed it:)
Jun 9, 2020 -
Re: Prince Charming
Thank you so much for the feedback! I really appreciate it. I will definitely put Three Dark Crowns on my reading list.
Jun 9, 2020 -
Re: YWS (parody of Y.M.C.A)
Someone needs to make this a real song. Seriously. Weird Al should put this on his next album. It's gold.
Jun 8, 2020 -
Re: Goodbye, Precious Gold
Thank you so much for the feedback! I totally understand what you mean about the blood/scars being a little out of place. I will definitely bring it back to the ...
Jun 7, 2020 -
Re: Goodbye, Precious Gold
Thank you so much for the feedback!
Jun 7, 2020 -
Re: Goodbye, Precious Gold
Thank you so much for the review! I'm glad you enjoyed reading it.
Jun 7, 2020 -
Re: Waiting for the Sky to Collapse 2.0
Thank you so much for the feedback! I'm glad that you think the poem has improved :)
Jun 3, 2020 -
Re: Waiting for the Sky to Collapse 2.0
Thank you so much for the review! I'll keep what you said in mind and I'll definitely try to work in more action.
Jun 3, 2020