EloquentDragon

Actually, this story works perfectly fine in the present tense. Try not to confuse personal opinions as die-hard rules. I thought it worked fine, as long as she keeps the ...

Sure, glad I could help

Ah, true. (Iggy's contest? Why was I not aware of this?)

No prob. ;)

;)

Cow, you're a troll, not a celebrity. Although you might be a delusional troll.

Aw thanks! This is actually really old, so it's not my best, but I'm glad you liked it. (It was also for a contest, so that's why it might seem ...

...What? That actually had very few points on grammar. And I often use a grammar mistake to make a comment about something else. And anyway, the same grammar mistakes are ...

Or rather, make the desired changes and hit the republish button.

Go to your publishing center, click on the work you want to edit, and find the "edit" button.

The speed of sound in all solids are not faster than in all liquids, same with gases (air). But that wasn't exactly the point, as the train would have drowned ...

No worries, there's been glitches in submitting for as long as YWS has been around. I was mostly amused, and not annoyed, by this. And I knew it wasn't your ...

Ah, thanks for reading my stuff. It turned out that this version wasn't working plot-wise, so I'm not planning on using this chapter. But how did it compare to the ...

Well, obviously, don't follow ALL of my advice... it was rather excessive. If this is a fantasy world set in modern times, then perhaps you should make that a bit ...

Oh, I and H are characters? I see. Then you need to revise that sentence their to read "riding together, astride a chestnut and a black." (I also, apparently, missed ...