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Re: "Hells Waiting Room"
ED here to review. I found this well, interesting... but it seemed to fall a little flat. We've seen stuff like this, a thousand times over. It's your job to ...
Oct 16, 2013 -
Re: Emotion
ED hath come... BTW, congratulations on the feature on your poem. I saw a ton of people liked it. (Although I must say, it seemed very, very familiar for some ...
Oct 16, 2013 -
Re: Dreaming of You- 1. Aunt Iseult
Hey Stella, ED here! Normally I don't do romance... but since it's you I made an exception. ;) colour pink. This isn't part of the review, but just an interesting ...
Oct 15, 2013 -
Re: LAPIS :The Introduction:
First of all, sorry that this was so long in coming. It turned into quite a monster, and took me a couple of hours to get her done. (No, I ...
Oct 12, 2013 -
Re: Only Your Voice Haunts Me Now
I am here to review this since I really should be off doing other things... You torment me to the core, wise men say love is the true spoil of ...
Oct 4, 2013 -
Re: Aokigahara
ED here, sorry if this is terribly harsh (because I feel that it is). It is ten at night and I can't type to save my life. Aokigahara Eh? Ao=blue ...
Oct 4, 2013 -
Re: The Cursed Ashi
ED here to review. Well... sort of. Since you mentioned that you wrote this a year ago, I didn't think I would try to be too serious here... heh heh ...
Sep 29, 2013 -
Re: [D]ead Chapter One - It's Started
Well, I promised myself I would do at least ONE review for review day this month, so here goes... Chapter One - It's Started So first off, this is a ...
Sep 29, 2013 -
Re: Psalm 23 . . . my meditation on it
ED here, To start off, I'm actually going to agree with your most negative critic. That is, you need to make this more original. It's a neat interpretation, and I ...
Sep 11, 2013 -
Re: When I Cry: Chpt. 1
I was going to post this as a reply to your reply, but I got this message: Request-URI Too Large The requested URL's length exceeds the capacity limit for this ...
Sep 10, 2013 -
Re: Henna
Ha ha, India! Am I right? Let me just say that I wasn't expecting that from the title. Anyway... The way you've structured this poem is a little odd. The ...
Sep 9, 2013 -
Re: When I Cry: Chpt. 1
ED here, sorry that this took so long in coming. I swore I would not forget you! Anyway… Comments taken directly from the text are contained in the spoilers below: ...
Sep 9, 2013 -
Re: Mother
ED here (finally) to review. Sorry that this took so long in coming, but I knew what a monster this review would turn out to be, so I tried to ...
Aug 31, 2013 -
Re: Hunters Mark
Well, the description of your piece caught my attention, so I thought I’d check it out. Nitpicks below: I’d wasted five minutes walking around in circles, doing nothing. I had ...
Aug 30, 2013 -
Re: Lighthouse
Hey there! I don't usually review poetry, but here goes: What I liked: 1. Good imagery, you used some nice description in there, added detail 2. The concise nature of ...
Aug 30, 2013
