Ellewoods93

I 5really like the repetitiveness and sybolism in this poem... how the heart-shaped box stands for love and for youth. Its really good! Just be careful with punctuation, and like ...

I think this story has lots of potential, and you are good at creating characters. Just be careful with grammer! A few grammer mistakes i noticed... 'I sighed, Rose was ...

I think this poem is reall good... just a few quick grammer-type things... In the second stanza, isn't "heart break" one word (heartbreak?) For the ending (Which i absolutely love!) ...