Ella_Mercy

Ah i love it! I really enjoyed ant's character, he seems like a little boy teenager, more than a man, but whenyouy talked about moving in with him i saw ...

Okay this has just been typed up but I have a friend nagging me to put it on here, haha that is so me And purple tights: you have apurple ...

Hey its ella :) 1: Irrelevant Words, Spellings, Grammar...etc Mary is sitting on a single bed, reading a book. The room is small and appears smaller by a thick lining ...

O k this is a proper review: Characters: "He" is obviously based on Mark, and I think you brought his character through quite well. Obviously they aren’t developed yet, but ...

Now im confused. YOu said you had lyrics for both of them on here... but clearly this is Alex aswell. And Oh God i was reading this, whilst listening to ...

Alex or Luke? Alex im guessing. These are pretty sad, in a good way, you know, upsetting not pathetic...etc ill stop rambling now :) BTW i AM writing your story ...

Hey Izzy :) I just had a random thought, so, Question: why is your name on yws ZaddieCaso? Anyway, review... Ah I love this. I like the way the names ...

Ok so i think i edited the first one aaages ago by email so thats ok. And i love the second as well :) ANd also CALL ME when you ...

Hey its ella! Ok, so this is my second review of this...but its not really a review. I know your stuck with cw etc etc but you need to post ...

I love this! Its so sweet, i remember you saying about it but its better than you said... I dont want to make any changes because theyve basically all been ...

Well i read it ages ago but its still making me cry :( Swimming AFTER school on wednesday :) Xx

I love you izzy :) But i kinda need to read the end of racing wind before i can read this properly.... SO pleeeease thats all i will ask for, ...

Hi =] I'm not going to review your grammar and word order...etc because i think Hawkie got it all =] but this is the general feel i get from this ...

Ilove this, the way you actually end each line without it becoming stiff and un-flowing (if thats a word) It actually makes some of it sound like a lyric, (bei ...

Hey Izzy Its Ella :D Stalkerrama. Anyway. So, i read this versus the original version and you changed alot of the grammar and sentence structure which is good. Also Miss ...