Ella_Mercy

Hi :) First, I really like the whole idea you have going, and the recurring theme of "i Love you". The lyrics are really beautiful :) The only thing I ...

Aww! I love it i love it i love it. Its like the perfect daydream. Obviously, this is a rarity to happen in real life, but its well done: not ...

Hi! Im Ella :) This is a pretty detailed review, but im bored and i think this could get really good, so :) --> There are some phrases you use ...

Hey! I really like this-- its one of those poems where you dont understand every phrase, but you can link the overall message to something in your mind. Its very ...

Hey :) Just before i start- I like this song :) sometimes i sound critical when i review things but i like this so dont take anything wrong :) xx ...

Nice :) I know what you mean: I get that sometimes. In fact, most stories i write come to an end at an indefinate point throughout because they all become ...

Wow. This is really nice: its fantasy but its not too confusing. Its pretty sadistic, what happens in this :P but its well written as well. I was a little ...

I like the stuggle at the beginning between booker's (awesome name btw :L) job and his true feelings on the subject. You capture the absurdity of the sutuation without completely ...

Hi :) i'm ella. I use too many smilies and i watch to much TV :P I lov ed this poem: It reads very smooth ly, almo st like a ...

Hey :) I'm ella, I use too many smilies and watch way to much tv :). Also, i tend to sound pretty smarmy when im doing a long review, (just ...

Hi :) its me again. THanks for writing chapter 2. Warning: This is a pretty long (and in some places harsh :S) review :) 1. I Hate Grammar!!! I don’t ...

Hey :) I write lyrics more than other stuff myself, so i get where your coming from with this :) but if your going to do the (cant think of ...

Hey :) Ok, so, i really like this, and i read htrough it and i couldnt see any problems with the plot (i dont look at grammar- i can barely ...

Save for the grammar..etc as mentioned above, i like the idea :) The name could be slightly offputting aswell, Tegan is a guys/ girls name but you did sort that ...

OMG I know her name :) I love it ;) Ooo I like it as well. Keep up writing :) And Em, POST SOMETHING!!! Ella XOX