ElizabethFiction

There's nothing I love better than a poem that expresses the wonders of death and where our lives continue after we're gone. There's nothing I have to critique on this ...

This is a beautiful poem overall, but one suggestion would be to capitalize the beginning of each stanzas and make sure when to end each line. But you're a great ...

For a quick poem it really sums up what many people fear on a day to day basis and I'm glad that you didn't make this poem a long one ...

I really like this poem because when a child is christened such a unique name, they may think that it defines them because of the harsh nicknames they have had ...

I'm glad you came up with this concept because it's a sad time when children are suddenly stripped of their innocence from a real world situation, and it's true that ...

I think this poem speaks up for anyone who feels that they don't have a voice. I'm glad you posted this because it lets people know that they are not ...

The personification of this noun 'Madness' is genius. It becomes even more deep when you use it as something that can consume us rather that something we acquire. It was ...

I love this poem because it's very touching and personal. Your use of similes and symbolism is flawless and it was like I could actually picture the journey. Great poem!! ...

Even though this is the shortest poem I've ever read, I love the straightforward message. It leaves the rest to the imagination without having to guess what will happen. Great ...

This story is the perfect example of how ANYONE from any background or social status can overcome the "cafeteria fringe" and kill the stereotype that popular and unpopular don't belong ...

This poem made me smile!! I normally don't read poems because they're usually boring, but this is why we have YWS so that emerging poets like you can entertain us ...

Wow... The title says it all. I have no problem whatsoever with the use of medieval words, but make sure that you use the correct forms with a few words ...

I love, love, love poems that leave its readers with a sense of mystery and angst. It shows the true beauty of a girl who is struggling with her self ...

Great job with the rhyming and flow of the poem. My only suggestion would be to add spaces between lines so that you have more teases because it sometimes flows ...

This was a very haunting poem that touches the very core of someone who has no idea what goes on behind closed doors and to people who are struggling with ...