Elizabeth

You love death don't you? Apparently though... I liked this... it was beauituflly writtn... well honestly I didn't finish it but I will someday... PROCRASTINATOR

I believe it appeared boring at hte beginning because I was pretty much introducing Jack... However I came to realize I never described Al... not at all. I don't even ...

Feh... Everything is cliche so stop pointing it out to me world! I am not naive to the fact everything I have written or have ever considered writing is some ...

I don't understand the poem, but what i think I do understand from it actually comes from your crummy last stanza. WEAK FROM STRONG MAN! Ahaha, i got that wrong ...

EEEEEEE :Hunter then hits me with a newspaper: I said I'm sorrrrrrryyyyy!!! EEEEEEEE! And by tightening up do you mean... Like... make stronger, more cursing, or use the word man ...

Repetitive... O' how that word is annoying. O' how annoying is this poem? :P

Slayers are murderers and when I said that I meant I was as sane as some insane murderer. Yeah, now that that's settled... :P

Thank you :) Now, I must go, for Geometry class is now. Aye....-

Hmm... this poem made drugs sound like fu-u-u-u-un :P I liked this. It was pretty sweet. By the way, I'm the girl fate hates.

It had this nice hazy feel to it... which can only be expressed by song... But I won't go there. Great job. Got more comment than my first work.... lol

Dear lord, this sounds like me only I can't write for me life and this was too good to even be compared to mine. Damn.

:Runs up behind you: :Wraps arms around and sobs: I LOVE YOU! LOL. I am a bit scary on medication... neahaha.... :twitches: Thank you both of you :D.

The only reason you love that line is because it reminds you of yourself. You selfish brat!

There, I added another line in the poem which might make it clearer as to the: For all I know there could even be another girl in your life But ...

*Sulks* It was good.... Well, now I'm going to consider when I retire writing... (1 year since I joined) OK.