Elizabeth

If I could take my anger out with the pinata I would use a club with a nail through it *heh*

Twas more of an outline I said... i'll try and like.... *shivers* edit it or something. I am better at outlines than actual stories I believe. Thanks for the critiques... ...

Hee hee. Sounded a bit cheesy. I sort of liked it... Never heard the word prescription in a love poem yet... Nice englightenment. -Elizabeth

Wow this was deeply beautiful! I really enjoyed it... something to just read while finishing my work... Now I can finish it. Great Job!

Probably, I mean I can only make things better from here.... Unless I magically screw up and make it all worse.

Scratch that the poem was called TWO POEMS :embarassed: Yeah... I miss those times... But yeah, those two tied in together and were extremely short which is why I posted ...

Thank you... Hmm, if I were to repeat the BLEED UNTIL YOU ARE SORRY where exactly would I put it? I can't find a place, I am slow in the ...

Hunter, I changed it a bit but I hope it's still a bit good, I have the feeling that my emotional standards and writing abilty have increased greatly, in which ...

I'm not Nikki but I read anyway. .... Very odd for you to write this while you consider literature boring.... point? Anyway... yeah... short.... And I'm sure "Nikki" will aggree... ...

Yeah... I kept re-reading lines and mixing up lines and people.... .... FIX IT!!!

Writers block... take that *slaps* AND THAT *punches* and that and that and that *beats it up* AH-HA I ONCE AGAIN RULE THIS CRATIVITY LEVEL! *entering level -4* WOO HOO!

You guys are nerds....

*Is sent to prison as some federal offense of long distance break-up* Aye... Aye... I aggree with you there... aye... Aye... Aye... Aye... Aye...

Wow... Talk about unoriginal.... I don't mean to be mean but... seriously, this is so unoriginal and it rhymed awkwardly to me... the words, they are AWKWARD TO ME!!!

Hmm, sounds very great. Where may I find this Halcyon Bay?