Elizabeth

sunshiney Hahaha. Lovely word. The poem was... ehh.... weird though. the end was weird, but yeah I havnet much to say because Snoink already butchered and ate it so yeah ...

lost my hand like it’s not been lost that was the only line that bothered me because... the repition of the word lost perhaps but the rest was very good... ...

I can't understand it either, but that's only my new distressed persona.... But I still liked it... Heh. Good one... Xantham Gum... *Good one* Weeps. My favourite part was: By ...

Hahaha I know only one more person with a long name, but it is still shorter than this... But yeah. aggree with everybody else. Still funny though. *Damn Irish :P*

Oh my god, youre' so good. I actually read this out loud like this: Maybe you will UNDERSTAND love POETRY When you’re caught in SUNDAY rains with me Alone, though, ...

Aww... it was cute... but Sonnets: 14 lines of rhymed iambic pentameter 1 line consists of 5 iambs 1 iamb equals 2 syllables And you can add a syllable or ...

derange Should be DERANGED. I'm not rewally the lyrical person... But I liked it. it was OK. But not like I'll buy an album unless you improve. Don't let me ...

Whoever you are, poetic stranger, I love you. Wow... this was a great poem though... It gave me a lot to think about... It might scare little children telling them ...

I like it... Its better than a.... *forgets* 575. That one :P My goodness I'm terrible haha.... HAIKU! It was sweet. You should add more in some sort of series, ...

You like me, you really really like me :P. Wow... this was lovely... too bad my childhood's happiest memories involved sleeping and talking to myself for hours and hours at ...

"...ya know..." That bothered me... The rest of the story... didn't really have the word YA though... *shrugs* I have to go to school in an hour so I can't ...

Heh, I read your second one first... so yeah... This sounds... a bit... stalker-ish... but it's all good. I liked it.... you use pretty words... I don't. That makes us ...

I'm sorry but this scares me :P You need new obsessions. I'm kidding. It was... a very weird.... very weird, piece... to say the least. *Is scared* Nice job on ...

What is the meaning of your flatulence, as I draw closer? STINKY I didn't really like the rhythem of the poem It was weird and that flatulence paragraph kind of ...

... look like he had accomplished something thought David. Looking like he had accomplished something, David thought. Lease should be least Gary looked around and said “What man? David you’re ...