Your Voice

by Ladyequine91
  • March 16, 2006
  • Poetry
  • Lyrical

This type of poem is called a Tanka. I just learned about it, and started working with it (format is 57577-syllables)

The sound of the drums
Echoes sweetly in my ears
Reminicing of
Your perfect voice, as sweet as I
Can remember, never less.

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Elizabeth
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Elizabeth wrote a review · Thu Mar 16, 2006 2:03 am

I like it... Its better than a.... *forgets* 575. That one :P
My goodness I'm terrible haha.... HAIKU!
It was sweet. You should add more in some sort of series, unless that wouldn't make it a Tanka... but just a ... Ultimate Tanka :P



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