Elizabeth

... No offense but... What was that??? ... I mean, that doesn't even seem to be classified as poetry to me, it's just the sound of fireworks launching, with the ...

"Stop smiling because I know your ovaries; They’re not smiling at all." Whoa! That got my attention! "Every late-night time you call." This doesn't cut it. I've read your poetry, ...

(O_O) This... was LONG!!! Alright... Let me nit-pick what I can in these early morning hours, shall I? (Which will eventually lead me to come back... to nit-pick more). First ...

I think you miss spelled Well. ... I think you misspelled MISSPELLED!!! Anyway... I really liked this. It's true. Very abstract, surreal, insane. I have NEVER seen anybody combine bunnies, ...

"A million like come from a million different ways." Like... what? :S Hmm... A sad and true poem. I have a few minor things I would like to address. "Silence ...

I enjoyed this piece. (J.K. better pray some of us don't knock on her door.) I liked the meaning behind this poem, but for a contest I don't think I'd ...

I liked this. ... That's amazingly weird, it was so incredibly short. It seemed like a haiku, only I hate haikus... I think one thing I'd like to point out ...

Hmm... Short and sweet. I don't want to sound odd, because you used the word "faces" twice... but for some reason, in a poem that short, I don't think that ...

I liked it. Some very insane punctuation errors, coming from uncapitalizing the I's and such. I think this'd be pretty good as a poem, arranged in a sonnet. If you ...

In the first stanza, second line, did you mean "Relieve?" (as in to get rid of) Or did you mean Relive (To do again)? Hmm... When you said: "I miss, ...

YOU, my dear friend, are one of the fewest people in the world I know who can make me LAUGH and insipire me to never take my pastries for granted ...

Well I won first place in my school poetry contest and it was my first try and I'm a sophomore... Hmm... a sonnet is 5 iambs, aka 10 syllables... Composed ...

It was an alright poem. For some reason it reminded me of WHAT IS THIS??? from A NIGHTMARE BEFORE CHRISTMAS.... I didn't think it was too choppy, but at the ...

I was laughing because it was so true... I didn't know how sadistic music has gotten (O_O) But wow, this poem was amazing and I couldn't stop laughing. Words make ...

I have not read poetry in forever... and this is the first one I chose to read in months and I do not regret it. With rhythm though, this line: ...