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Thank everyone! Each of your critiques have helped.

stiches in four diffrent places- my face, my stomach, over three quaters Stiches should be stitches, diffrent should be different, and quaters should be quarters. blood always made me feal ...

stiches in four diffrent places- my face, my stomach, over three quaters Stiches should be stitches, diffrent should be different, and quaters should be quarters. blood always made me feal ...

Thanks, Rosey Unicorn. All the advice was great. The animals will hopefully be less human like in the next draft. I never noticed how the second daydream blended with the ...

Thanks for your critiques everyone. I'll add more description next time.

A little background info: Why: I read a National Geographic article on this. I know my Neanderthals, thankyou. Where: this is set in what would later be France, as the ...

A little background info: Why: I read a National Geographic article on this. I know my Neanderthals, thankyou. Where: this is set in what would later be France, as the ...

A little background info: Why: I read a National Geographic article on this. I know my Neanderthals, thankyou. Where: this is set in what would later be France, as the ...

A little background info: Why: I read a National Geographic article on this. I know my Neanderthals, thankyou. Where: this is set in what would later be France, as the ...

Percy Jackson and the Olympians is such a great series. I can't wait for May when the fifth book finally comes out. It is so good.

Card is such a good reader. I'm definitely buying Enchantment next time I go to the bookstore.