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Elinor565

  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: My name is Kelly-Marie and I'm a murderer

    Wait... What? She killed her mother?! *tries to swallow lump in throat* That's it. I will do something drastic. Right now. I always knew alcohol ought to be illegal. Ps. ...

    Jul 22, 2014
  • Other » General, General Re: The three biggest lies on the internet

    I suddenly feel so ashamed...

    Jul 21, 2014
  • Other » General, General Re: ...

    Hmmm... I don't know, but I do think that she watches Game of Thrones. I loved your piece, by the way!

    Jul 18, 2014
  • Other » General, General Re: I will publish characters!

    You ought not to be spewing profanities about as if this were twitter. It's a writers website. We write. We do not randomly burst out vulgar words. If you want ...

    Jul 7, 2014
  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, General Re: Stephanie Pritchard's Life Chapter 1

    Hey, you are allowed to use your own personal 'mascot'! I have one myself, named Astra. You don't have to be sorry about it: be proud. Tell everyone about Pinkie! ...

    May 26, 2014
  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, General Re: Stephanie Pritchard's Life Chapter 1

    Please. It's a review. If I wanted to be all sweet and la di da then i would, but that would make me a hypocrite. You can't just throw a ...

    May 26, 2014
  • Short Story » Horror, General Re: The Looking Glass

    Hey Dreamy, thanks for reviewing! Now that I think about it, you are right, and I ought to have used 3rd person. Unfortunately I didn't think about it at the ...

    May 25, 2014
  • Short Story » Horror, General Re: The Looking Glass

    Hey, thanks for reviewing! Yeah, I know I did quite a lot of typo's. That's what I get for writing at 4:30 am!

    May 25, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Prologue

    Hi. First of all, I'd like to say well done for not making your prologue ramble to much. The first line really had me hooked. Unfortunately, I found the way ...

    May 20, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Horror Re: the things they didn't know

    Simply beautiful. Heart wrenching, yes, but this piece is absolutely stunning.

    May 4, 2014
  • Poetry » Satire, Realistic Re: Pretty Face

    I am totally bowled over by this.

    May 2, 2014


Lots of times you have to pretend to join a parade in which you're not really interested in order to get where you're going.
— Christopher Darlington Morley