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Oh, okay! I've skimmed over a few articles and it's got a lot of cool stuff! Should be a good resource when I revise!

Thanks! I've gotten that comment about the dialogue from everyone that's read it so far, so it's definitely the thing I'll tackle first and foremost when I begin my revisions. ...

Lol Blue, I had forgotten about this, I wrote it so long ago! Thanks for your insight :3

Thank you very much! :) I chose a sonnet because it was a school assignment, and the free form version of the poem was already fourteen lines! I thought I ...

I'm not going to give up! Yeah that clears things up a little bit, I was jut confused by the first chapter. My great grandma moved from Alabama to Ohio ...

Part 1: Thanks Audy! (Part 3 still has to be written)

Hi WritingIsEverything! Welcome to YWS! I agree with Aria and niteowl. I'm not entirely sure that I see this as a poem. While there a lot of great abstract works ...

Yeah my internet was being funky. I have no idea how that happened. o_0

Haha, this is is for a flash fiction contest and I can't be more than 250 words, and I'm right at that limit. Otherwise, thank you! And this set during ...

Haha, this is is for a flash fiction contest and I can't be more than 250 words, and I'm right at that limit. Otherwise, thank you! And this set during ...

Haha, this is is for a flash fiction contest and I can't be more than 250 words, and I'm right at that limit. Otherwise, thank you! And this set during ...

Haha, this is is for a flash fiction contest and I can't be more than 250 words, and I'm right at that limit. Otherwise, thank you! And this set during ...

Thanks Audy! :D

Thanks! I wrote this based off a prompt to get my muse flowing after 6 months of not writing. I do kind of like what I did the beginning with ...

I'm about to get going, but expect my critique at some point this weekend. Remind me if I don't get to it by then. Thanks.