Elinor

Wow, thanks for such an in depth critique! Yeah, Amy's lived her whole life in America but been raised by her mother who lived in England so I envision she ...

Thanks so much

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I'm so glad you enjoyed it! I fixed the little errors, and your review is helpful because it tells me the point of the script is coming across, which is ...

Yeah so it's a little story of the day they sailed (and ultimately got shipwrecked). The first episode their first day on the island, and while the theme song is ...

Yeah, I hear you about their voices sounding too similar. I'm writing these primarily to lay out backstory but also to strengthen their voices and writing them as individual people ...

Thanks so much for your review! You can read about Amy's mom and more of the cult here: It's a 3 part story :)

Of course! Will do :)

AHH I'm so glad you liked. So, just to clarify, the short film I made is actually Alex and Sasha's story. We see how they're both indoctrinated with flash forwards ...

Ha, I'm glad you enjoyed it! I agree that Debbie is rude, it's intentional. The relationship is supposed to be toxic, but I don't want her to come across as ...

Ahh yay. I'm glad you liked it. :D Can't wait to hear what you think of Part 2.

Thank you so much! I'll send you the links. :)

Ahhh thank you so much! So Alex and Sasha are both 18. Alex is about seven months older than Sasha, so she would be almost 19 whereas Sasha would have ...

Ahh! Thank you so much for your review. I know I can struggle with passive voice so I appreciate it being pointed out. I am doing well! Can I tag ...

Plot twist: Summer ends up on Catfish XD Just kidding. Yes please do! I'm going to try to get caught up in the next few days. :)