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Re: Into the Depths Chapter 2
This is ooooold. I've trashed the piece for the now, but I most likely will come back to it later and completely rewrite it. Thank you for your comments, though.
Sep 13, 2010 -
Re: Bear Lake
I've been meaning to critique this, but I've been busy! Watch this space over the next couple of days. ^^
Sep 7, 2010 -
Re: Annie
*Rewritten*
Sep 4, 2010 -
Re: The Poisoned Glass
Hiya, Sorry this is so late! Anyway, I read this through and overall, it's improved a lot since the first draft. You really took the advice you were given to ...
Aug 30, 2010 -
Re: Annie
*EDITED*
Aug 22, 2010 -
Re: .
I'm taking it down for revisions/reworking and such.
Aug 21, 2010 -
Re: The Dark Prison
I want to review this, but I have to go in a few minutes. Watch this space!
Aug 19, 2010 -
Re: .
Enigma- Thanks! However, this story isn't over. There's much much more to come. ;)
Aug 16, 2010 -
Re: Just Know That I Love You {Edited}
Nice analogy, Snoink. xD Anyway, thanks all for the comments! I changed the ending back to what it was originally, and I'm going to work more at this and possibly ...
Aug 7, 2010 -
Re: Into the Depths Chapter 1 [Reworked]
Just reworked a lot of the plot and have thus rewritten this! So, any new feedback would be appreciated. :D
Jul 11, 2010 -
Re: The Land of the Faeries
*Edited*
Jun 26, 2010 -
Re: Galaxy [Edit]
*Edited*
Jun 17, 2010 -
Re: Test #2
:D
Jun 14, 2010 -
Re: Navita's EERAAI Entry - Past Cherry Island
Maybe she's being modest, Lava. :P Anyway, congrats! Navita, would you like critiques, or are you just putting this up here for us to read and enjoy?
May 29, 2010 -
Re: Into the Depths Chapter 1 [Reworked]
*EDITED*
May 28, 2010