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Hi Teddybear! Welcome to YWS! This was a very pretty poem, and I liked it alot. I did notice the format! However, in future poems, you probably shouldn't tell it ...

Hi Jack! Again, welcome to YWS! I enjoyed this poem. However, I couldn't really see any connection between the seperate words. Sure, they are written and described in the same ...

Hi Splodey! Here is your review, as promised. Sorry it's been delayed so much! Anyway. I really liked this poem. You had fantastic word choice, which help paints a great ...

Hi! First, may I suggest a different title then just 'haiku'? Your poem is very good, but the unoriginal title masks that. It is sort of calling an epic high ...

Hey Firestarter. I really liked this poem. It was well written, spooky, and kind of disturbing. It's certainly a breath of fresh air after the bad emo poetry I've been ...

Hi Olivia. Before I begin, I just want to say that as much as everyone loves smiley faces, putting them in your titles is kind of amateurish. Onto the story. ...

Hey there BottomlessEyes. I'm sorry, but I didn't enjoy this poem. This is because, inn addition to what Kyllorac said, this piece has nothing new or original about it. It's ...

Hi BenFranks! Sorry that it was kind of delayed, but here is your review, as promised. ^^ The problem with it is... The problem with what? I skimmed over the ...

Hey there Singing. This is a quite beautiful piece-it made me cry. It seems surreal, almost, that something like this could happen. Hawkie pretty much covered the nitpicky stuff that ...

Hey June! Here is your review, as promised. For starters, I really really liked your poem. I've already starred this, and I wish you luck in Hannah's contest. There are ...

Hey, Xirenia! I'll tell you, I've been critiquing a lot of first time poets lately, and sometimes I don't believe them since the poetry is so good! Are a lot ...

Hello Cassie! This was quite an enjoyable poem to read, and I commend you for writing it! :D The topic is a controversial one, but it is seldom written about. ...

Hey again, RedBird! As I step into the new found world, First of all- 'the new found world' should probably 'a new found world'. The context now gives me the ...

Hello RedBird. Here is your critique! Frigid Death I'm looking at the title and already I'm hooked. It gives the reader a promise of a dark and chilling (no pun ...

Hey Cotton! How goes it? Here is your review which you rightfully earned. To start this off, I found this to be a unique story with an interesting premise. Your ...