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Hi jorge! I see you've just joined YWS, so welcome! How are you enjoying it so far? One thing I see is that this is just a little flash-fiction, so ...

Hi! I'll have to say that I agree with Tenyo. While this piece has potential, it's annoying because you literally shove the message in our heads. A good science fiction ...

Hey Teddy! So, I don't really know what to think about this story. I thought the idea was good, and I'm excited to see more entries in this, because right ...

Hi Sionamara! I didn't enjoy this. The idea was interesting, but the execution wasn't very good. It was too short and the pace was all clunky. It's deserving of something ...

Hi Hope! Sorry that this critique is so late! Anyway, I'm not quite sure what to think of this. It seems like more of a song to me, so I'm ...

Hi! Hmm, this is an interesting piece-an interesting idea about our daily lives. Since allergies are very common in our daily lives, a story like this would require a lot ...

Hi! So, this poem! It's definitely cute for what it is, and humorous at that. I only had one tiny nitpick, as there isn't much I can say without you ...

Hi! As requested. Before I get into the details of the review, I just want to mention something little about the formatting. You should divide into stanzas. Poems can sometimes ...

Hi Aliza! Sorry this was kind of late, but here we go with the review. I just want to mention something about the formatting of this piece. Since it's all ...

Hi! So, I think I felt a little cheated when reading this poem. This is simply because it could be so much better, be filled with so much more detail ...

Hi Ease! So, I'm really not quite sure what to tell you. First and foremost, you need to skip a new line whenever a new person speaks. It's an age ...

Hi! Hmm, I'm not quite sure about this story. It's definitely cute, and the idea is nice, but I didn't really think of much of the execution (the actual way ...

Hi! So, I read this story two times through, and the first thing I could think of was, "this needs to be proofread!" You've got all kinds of silly grammar ...

Hi Sammi! As requested. So, I really like this poem. It's got an interesting, original idea to it, and some of your poetry is just beautiful. I especially love this ...

Hi Sarebear! What's up? I think I quite liked the image you were trying to create with this poem. The problem is that I don't think it delivers the way ...