Elinor

Hi! Welcome to YWS! I hope you're enjoying your time on the site so far. Anyway, this it supposed to be a short story with parts, or a novel? "Chapters" ...

Hi Maddy! How are you? Now, I'm going to come out and say that I've never read Goosebumps or any other books by R.L. Stine[sp?], and I'm not familiar with ...

Hey Dreamy! I really liked this poem. I once heard that things we do subconsciously are often the best, or at least the most interesting. It's weird and demented, but ...

Hello! Okay, so! The idea for this story was nice, but what I'm not fond of is the execution of this piece. Even though it's old, you obviously posted it ...

I'm going to have to mention Twelve and Thirteen , the second and third books in a trilogy by Lauren Myracle, the woman who wrote those chatroom books. There's a ...

Hi! Interesting. Is this supposed to be a prologue of sorts? It's very short and I don't know exactly how I critique this by itself. We're given no introduction to ...

Hey Evi! What's up? I'm going to do what I did for Demeter and do a line-by-line critique of this and then give my general thoughts at the end, alright? ...

Hi Demeter! How are you? I'm going to try things a little differently and give this a line by line critique, okay? Mostly because this a little long and it's ...

Hi Fire! What's up? So, this story. I didn't really like it. Even though it's really short, there isn't much that goes on within this story. Two [I don't even ...

Hi Evi! So, since you've been so helpful to me for the past few days, I thought I'd return your favor by critiquing this story. Now, I didn't really like ...

Hi, Unworst! Welcome to YWS! I hope you enjoy your stay. Now, I'm going to say that I used to write a lot of things like this prologue when I ...

Hi again Jorge! So, I just wanted to expand upon the comment that Chupastosa made earlier and that have been made in your previous stories. You may think that proper ...

Hi Sionamara! How are you? As requested. Now, this poem was by all means very cute. I think you've created something that almost everyone can relate to-a cute right of ...

Hey King! How are you doing? I think you've got a good start to this. The idea is nice. My problem is that it just seems really rushed and you ...

Hi, Write! So, I think I quite liked this poem. I can definitely relate to it and how the main character feels a lot. This has touched me on a ...