Elinor

Hi, Wicked! Before I start, just a few notes about script formatting.Whenever you have stage directions in a chunk of dialogue, you should always go to a new line for ...

Hiya, So, this isn't bad. It definitetly kept me interested in reading, but I feel like the execution could be a lot better, especially since we've seen this sort of ...

Hiya, Excuse me if this is a little rusty, as I'm not that great at reviewing poetry. Before I talk about the poem as a whole, I wanted to mention ...

Hiya, Welcome to YWS! Are you enjoying it so far? I've never been a fan of prologues for a few reasons, mostly because they are rarely necessary. If you put ...

Hiya, This is okay. There a lot of really strong points to this story. However, it doesn't feel as if it's as good as it could be. Although I do ...

Hiya, I really, really like this story. It's captivating and although we know there is no hope for the characters, I'm still hooked. I want to continue and see what ...

Hiya, Short review today. This was a really nice story. I loved the mood, setting and characterization, and your word choice. I was hooked from beginning to end, and although ...

Hiya, I see you're new to the site. Welcome! Are you enjoying it so far? In regards to the story, you have a good premise but the execution is somewhat ...

Hiya, So this was an interesting piece that's unlike everything I've ever read before. You have a neat style and way with words, and you really build up the setting ...

Hiya, So, I like this. It's well written and you've developed some good characterization. But I don't really know how to describe this story in terms of the way it ...

Hiya, So, this is alright. The premise is promising but needs work, and the general execution of this is not by far as good as I feel like it could ...

Hiya, This story was alright. I thought it was magnificent how you built up the atmosphere in the first half of the story and really made us feel the setting--that ...

Hiya, So, this is definitely unlike anything that I have ever read. I know I'll have to re-read this eventually, because there were some parts that didn't really make any ...

Hiya, So, I think you have a lot of good in this story. I really like the structure and style and what you want to do with the characters. When ...

Hiya, This is a nice piece. I love how you build up suspense and tension throughout, and some of your word choice and sentence structure is just lovely. However, what ...