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ElikiaKay

Rift draft

  • The Rift- chapter 1 - draft 2

    The Rift is another dimension.

    • Novel / Chapter
    • Action / Adventure · Teen Fiction
    4 min read
  • The Rift Chapter 2 - draft 2

    Please tell me whether you can understand this. Also I am not the best at conveying emotion so I could use some tips on that.

    • Novel / Chapter
    • Action / Adventure · Teen Fiction
    6 min read
  • The Rift Chapter 3- draft 2

    I added more to chapter 2 so read that first. Also I need help. I am not the be best with talking.

    • Novel / Chapter
    • Action / Adventure · Teen Fiction
    5 min read
  • The Rift Chapter 4- draft

    Added a bit to the last chapter so re red that. Focus on duologue and flow if you are writing a review, thanks!

    • Novel / Chapter
    • Action / Adventure · Teen Fiction
    7 min read


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