Elfboy

Hey there, Ethan here for a review! Very, very good story, one of the best I've read in a while! Very philosophical, and you did a good job drawing emotions ...

Thanks, Fortis! I'll try to keep that in mind as I move forward as a poet, very good advice.

Really great poems, Gem(and whatcha)! I especially like the second one, it's very emotional. Well done!

Okay, me and Gem did a little rewriting to clarify some things. We tried to make it clearer that the 'sleeping' human is a mannequin, and we made sure for ...

Hey Felistia! Thanks for the review, it's very helpful. We're trying to re-work the mannequin description, it has confused several people now, so I think we'll try to make it ...

Hey, thanks for the review! The reason the book is so vague is that Zaylr never actually landed on Earth, just watched it from afar. We decided to let them ...

Thanks for the review!

Thank you so much, I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Wow, a great poem here! Very powerful, and I found it deeply relatable. I have nothing to critique on, so I'm not going to make this into a review, but ...

Hey Tuckster, thanks for the review! The theme is meant to be a coming to terms with death, but I can see how it might be unclear. I'll think about ...

Thank you so much!

Beautiful poem! I'm not going to make this a review, because I have nothing to critique, but I wanted to say that the rhymes are so effortless I almost didn't ...

Thanks! I'm suddenly seeing the irony in writer's block has inspiring a poem.

Thanks!

Thanks!