User avatar

ElephantGirl1

ElephantGirl1

  • Poetry » Other, General Re: The Holidays

    Hey there, Here's my review this poem was nice, and pleasant when you started out writing it...and do not get me wrong, it is a nicely crafted poem-I've always had ...

    Dec 12, 2015
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Realistic Re: Only a Prayer Away

    This is beautiful! Absolutely wonderful! I liked the fact that it flowed nicely with the rhythm and tempo. Also I am struggling right now with my grandpa being gone for ...

    Dec 12, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Light After Darkness

    This was an awe-inspiring poem! So powerful! I struggle with depression as well, and this describes that feeling perfectly. The rhythm when read aloud, set the mood up perfectly and ...

    Dec 12, 2015
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: Dear Santa Claus

    Hey there, This is ElephantGirl with your review This was absolutely amazing. Lol I wanted to share it to Facebook, I did not however. I really am wondering how you ...

    Dec 7, 2015
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Like the Back of My Hand

    Hey this is ElephantGirl here giving you your review :) I am in awe with how well your flow was, as well as your rhyming. Also I loved the idea ...

    Dec 7, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Who am I?

    Hey, ElephantGirl here giving you a review. I loved this poem. I love diving into the abstract and really digging into ideas and writing about them. I also agree with ...

    Dec 7, 2015


You own everything that happened to you. Tell your stories. If people wanted you to write warmly about them, they should have behaved better.
— Anne Lamott