Elelel

*points to Darkmoon's age* you did that and your twelve (no age discrimination intended), that's good, very good. PS, love your signature, just noticed it! :lol:

Ps, the new name sounds great! I'll keep look out for the revised version! EDIT: Oh, it's already there, now I feel like a real idiot... :oops:

There we go! And there's heaps there handy for ANYBODY, no one has nothing to learn. About what you said with the character descriptions ... There's a healthy amount of ...

Right! I'm back with time on my hands! Now... firstly, the "my stomach is parched" thing is still getting to me. I have never heard anyone say it before, and ...

Yes, a very good start! That first sentence confused me, but otherwise everything seemed fine.

He he, yes. I like that too. It's also how I;ve sort of always seen gods ... like I never outright thought "humans created gods" but it was one of ...

I thought consent was only if you were going to print it off ... *lost* (don't mind me, answer me in pm form if you're going to answer, don't transform ...

Your muse is back! Yay! I loved it! The rhythm was lovely, as usual, and I just liked the way you blamed or thought it might just be the weather ...

Well, I'm really bad at tenses, and I mean, really bad. So if your unsure I 'd check it with someone who does know for certain!

I inspired you! *Laughs in delight and claps hands* (I really did that by the way) I feel so appreciated and happy! :D :D :D :D :D :D

Ok, if you've got reasons then I think that'll be fine :D. I didn't think of that guard showing up again actually ... good idea! I like it when things ...

Yeah, I know the names aren't so great, and the paragraph you mentioned too. But I'm not so good at names so I'll keep them for now.

What can I say? You have me hooked. I want to read more. :D. So hurry up and post more!!! Please. I'm not sure I could do any editing that ...

THAT, is exellent for a 8 year old! No other comment required.

He he yeah. I need to perfect the next bit. I didn't really think anyone was interested or I would have done it before now. OK, I'll start perfecting so ...