El-lyncho

I like the consistency of the order of each line, it gives this slightly broken up poem a feel to it. However, it seemed to be the main thing that ...

I like this.. fairly simple overall, but powerful. I really like I gaze above and look at myself, reflected by lonely grey clouds. Not so sure about repetition of 'realise' ...

[Wow] :wink: Great poem, although it seems to slightly stray from the subject nearer the end from what I can see.. The unlucky one’s stayed to Needs to be 'ones' ...

That poem is definitely very powerful and seems to illustrates the point well of the unmovability of a strong feeling (i.e. love). The first time I read it through I ...

It's quite a sweet poem overall, could possibly be improved by more powerful language as it seems to slightly let down the overall feel. Oh, no she crossed the finish ...