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This is very apocalyptic. Does that make sense? It reminds me of a passage from the bible. Anyway, a few things here: 1. You tell too much. Have a look ...

This is pretty good. I mean, it doesn't exactly blow me away as the language is very good, but it fails to create an atmosphere, if you get my drift. ...

This is very honest and you really laid the speaker's feeling bear. By doing this the somewhat raw language becomes something quite beautiful. Can I see this as a song? ...

Hello! I don't have much time to write this- but I really wanted to leave a comment to let you know I read it and enjoyed it. And it's always ...

Ooo...Latin? Methinks? -That is an actual word. I read it in 'The Tempest' by Shakespeare. Hehe. How's life? Well this is very intriguing indeed. I can tell that a lot ...

Hello. I've been dreadfully tied up with work at the moment, but I promised myself to get some reviews done today in all the madness. So here I am! And ...

Hello! Indeed, *nods head approvingly* this is very good. It ticked a heck off alot of boxes that I look for in poetry. It was very frank and honest, not ...

Hello D, of course I'll critique your poem. I actually thought I'd reviewed it before, but I must have read it late one night before going to bed. So here ...

Hello! I see that you're relatively new, so welcome to YWS! Just while you're reading this I'd like to invite you to go take a look at the Rules and ...

Hello! To begin with you tell far too much. That's a big mistake to start with in the first stanza, because it puts people off immediately. It's a shame because ...

Hello Jasmine! Well I thought this was a wonderful poem. It reads easily, I didn't have to go over it or anything to understand it. What I got out of ...

Ehem, thank you for that- fun4eva. Hello! Well I thought this was awesome. For the most part. I loved it because the repetition didn't even bother me and you had ...

Hello! Okay well I can tell you tried hard with this. It showed. But poetry is very hard work, so we have to be prepared to try several times at ...

Hey Gabe. Welcome to the site. Haven't seen you around much, alas- you shall be getting a friend request from me! Do not be alarm, I am just a friendly ...

Hello! Okay, so I've seen you around before. But have you posted this before? I seem to remember something about a race. Well onto the poem! Alright, I'm going to ...