Eimear

Hey, this is a broad poem, well put together and accessible to a lot of people. Probably why it achieved a lot of success- well done about that by the ...

Hey, this is gonna be a really quick review- I was just flicking through a few poems on here, reading them, but I thought this one deserved a comment. I ...

You could take this poem a lot further than you have done. It's about a five out of ten at the moment for effort, and I say this because it's ...

Hey Jack, I really loved this. It's one of the best poems I've read in ages. I loved it so much because it's not dead simple, and yet- I get ...

Hi there screamandshout. Don't think we've met. :) Ok, so this poem is about a girl hiding her pain. You made a pretty good stab at evoking a real feeling ...

Hey :) I was impressed by this poem. It's not perfect, it's not even fully finished in my opinion, but I liked the ideas raised in it. The speaker seemed ...

Just going to give you a few clear points towards polishing up this poem. Rhythm. Everything in this seems a little loose, and if you tighten it up it will ...

Okay, I'm going to shoot from the hip. The biggest problem with this poem is theme. Shakespeare was instrumental in influencing how we write (and what we write about) in ...

Hey Brown Eyed Girl. I don't think we've met, so hey, I'm Eimear. Your chum. I hope! Anyway, this was a jam packed poem, that's for sure. So much to ...

Hey, the title caught my eye. Although I was initially impressed, both by the title and the unique structure the poem had, it just didn't deliver the message to me. ...

Hey, I also really liked this. The structure was sound and you presented a subject in a new and refreshing way. It was pretty unique and without being too corny, ...

Hey Kylan. I happen to be your biggest fan. Bet you didn't know that. Now, here's what I thought. This is like something I'd read for an exam on poetry. ...

Hey, I'm Eimear. Pleased to meet you. Someone who rhymes! *High fives* I often write rhyming poetry. It's pretty hard to get right, so I salute you. Usually people warn ...

Hey Crysi. I'm Eimear. I don't think we've met before. Allow me to take a look at your poem. What I liked about it was that it took me more ...

I agree with tnme22- this was a pretty decent song. The hurt was brought across in a less obvious way- that is, you kept the clichés on the down low ...