Ego

so: Death seems more desirable Than this life I'm living. I've already ruined my plans (Or lack thereof) For the future By standing by a woman Whom I love dearly ...

Anyone? no witty comments, Brad? Jack? anyone?

Thrusting his blade into a fallen orc's still heaving chest, Marrek Lionheart looked around, searching for the source of those silver fletched arrows that had so quickly cut down his ...

his last name is much more important...

noted and corrected

That's the most time I've spent reading a poem in a long time, Misty--you kept me interested long enough to have me finish this, so that's gotta count for something! ...

not enough...poetry I rest my case.

Impressive, TBR. Very nice. I, too, would like to see more of a reaction to the wife's death, but other than that a good start.

While very creative in its own right, I just couldn't get into it Brad...maybe I'm reading it wrong. I must tell you, I totally empathize though :)

I get the feeling I did something wrong by suddenly switching away from Yurok...:(

I like the story so far, especially how you started it. Heroe's being pursued is always a great way to begin a novel--as is a fight scene. Great start, do ...

of course they can! (where'd that come from?) TBR, when are you going to get more of this story up so you can show Sam what the actual training is ...

yeah, I tend to skip letters when I type...thanks

lol. NEVER!

If I could only get trplies like that all the time I'd be posting more DAILY!