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it's easier if you already have an idea of what you want written, becuase then there wont be any radical changes......

Good, TBR--disturbing becuase I know what it's about, but great stuff--I love your style, as always.

That is definitely Crysi lol

gmail it to me....(the outline) and Kay--hope you enjoy it!

"he seemed to glow with a glowing, blood red aura" Um, redundant? "Killing as not in this man’s nature" -was, not as "My fist exploded in a shower of pain ...

ah, i see now--thanks for the clariication

I like it--short and sweet--the only thing iw as confused about is the reference to the left eye--why the left eye?

Ever the rebel, Mike glared at the man and called out. “Who the Hell are you to tell us what to do!” he demanded. The man didn’t reply, just stood ...

Thanks for the reply, TBR--anyone else? I'd really appreciate some help on this, or at least some input...

Carmina, I love this--I really do--powerful and emotional, it is presented in just such a way that it thumbs a string on the soul.

Wow....I feel the emotion there, TBR--very well done--beautiful and powerful in its own way. Lovely. Whoever its for I can tell you mean it dearly.

Wow Mesh...that was kinda chilling--actually it was--physically sent a chill up my spine--good stuff. Noty necessarily GOOD stuff, but GOOd stuff, if that makes sense.

okay, cool--thank you for the offer Crysi.

Wow, thanks for that! Thank you very much!

Soyala, not everything in love and life is about wracking emotion and gritty, cutting edge intensity. There is this little thing called "tone." The tone of this poem is not ...