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But to no avail! For the floor farthest beneath me suddenly gives way and the entire Tower is reduced by one level, but it should be noted that this reduction ...

OMG lyke...soooo cute! Yeah. Went there. --D EDIT: I got points for that? That's just sad. Seriously, though, the lyrics are very cutesy and lighthearted--reflects young love very well, because ...

“Clair… Clair, where are you?” Rose whispered, her voice becoming urgent. Clair blinked and reached out to touch her sister’s clammy hand. “I’m here right here,” she said. “Where? I—

“Are we almost there?” Brad asked impatiently. “A few more minutes, son,” Ken answered. It was eleven degrees outside, the car started up the mountain on a steep paved road. ...

I fear for your sanity at times, Aet. This is not one of those times--genius in the making, right here. Been borrowing my ego again? Your voice in this is ...

Hi Medusa; I saw her little red Honda parked outside its old rusty gates. If the place is condemned, would she risk her car being so easily spotted it (as ...

Hi again, Kaylyn-- Right off the bat... The day seemed to drag along so slowly after science. I plopped down next to Karisa at lunch. Tyler, Alyssa, and Courtney were ...

Hi Kang-- I liked this. Nicely written, great descriptions, good dialog. There's really only a couple plot-holes I noticed. The first is the alien's appearance. Obviously he looks human, because ...

Hi Kaylyn-- I have to say this before I say anything else; you were doing so well until this one sentence. Few errors, few misspellings, my interest held after reading ...

Hi Armed-- First, the rules: One of such rules is that we require you to review more than you post--that is, for every new piece you post, we ask that ...

Hello, Banana: First of all, one of the rules we have around here is a request that you do not post your titles in all caps--it comes across as yelling, ...

The Legend of Drizzt is nothing short of amazing. Salvatore's characters are second to none. His style puts some people off, but his plot, world-building skills, and characterization are amazing. ...

Reak-- Some of this was very well done. The wording you chose for provided a very foggy, mysterious tone. Unfortunately it left us, as readers, in the dark. I understand ...

Unless his bed is very high off the ground, the likelihood of him smashing his head against it with enough force to do that to him is slim. Maybe he ...

Sorry for the late critique, Kylan. All of this was really well done, my friend. I have very little to comment on, and even then, it's all nitpicks and personal ...