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Wow, this was really well written. For example, I really enjoyed the line, " As if from an old photograph, their faces face and I see no one . Just ...

thanks!:)

will do thank you ! :)

" I stave off realization; we are all clinging, stuck like food to a plastic spoon." I thought this was a great comparison, and the imagery is great as well. ...

Haha, I found this piece to be clever and funny, nice job

Nice work! This is a well written piece, I found it to be both powerful and thought-provoking. Keep up the good work.

Very powerful writing here! I felt a lot of emotion in this piece, I only a couple sentence structure errors. For example, "One thing you ever you ever" I wasn't ...

Wow, nice job as I read this I pretty much sang it in my head and there is so much feeling in each line. The lyrics painted the imagery of ...

Wow. I thought the imagery was great, but what is truly great about this poem is how many people can relate to this poem; it is raw and holds so ...

Thank you so much! I am so glad you enjoyed it!

Reading this took me back to when I started making friends as a child. I enjoyed the line, " But then i knew, That the next day, you would be ...

Great uses of imagery, and the title really caught my attention!