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Re: Hide and Seek
Phee Phi Pho Phum, I'm going to review until you're numb. I'm Editor, reviewing for team Phee Phi Pho Phum! Nice to meet you! I love your poem. It might ...
Aug 30, 2015 -
Re: Night
Phee Phi Pho Phum, I'm going to review until you're numb. Hey, I'm Editor, and I'm reviewing for team Phee Phi Pho Phum. I like your poem, but there are ...
Aug 30, 2015 -
Re: ...
I'm here! I agree with Luvzi, that it's hard to review, but I do have some nitpicks on word choices. I would like to point out that "bestest" isn't a ...
Sep 6, 2014 -
Re: The weirdo scientists and the submerged people: A graphic story starring Sims people.
Hi there! It's me, Little Sister! This was really fun to read. It was funny, and I was smiling through all of it; that could just be because I like ...
Aug 31, 2014 -
Re: Selection with gambits
Hey there! I'm Sister. I love your poem. In the box, I've fixed most grammatical errors I could find. Although it's not much, I hope it helps: Start staking out ...
Jul 20, 2014 -
Re: It is indeed a big, bad world.
Hey there! This is my first ever review since joining, so I hope it helps. What I liked about your poem was that the words and sentences flow so well ...
Jun 24, 2014
