Echolair

Not bad. One thing though. Is it some sick, scary moment to find excitement from by the readers or is it typically a one time interview with some psychopath? I'm ...

I liked it. Not so appealing as it gets on but somehow just fine. It would've gotten better if the story wasn't rushed though. It did feel like fast-forwarding it ...

I really want to know the motive of the killer and why eleven days. Lol. So far, so good. I'm keeping my fingers crossed for the succeeding chapters. Hope it ...

Nate has been her best friend for all her life. He has been a very good and trust-worthy friend. A friend that anybody would kill for. Their friendship is still ...

Darn. Please revise it if you may. -_- Im sure now you know what else needs to be taken out and put in. Godbless with that. Keep writing too okay? ...

Dang, they're leaving? :( This is just too sad. Ignore the fact that i rarely talk to him....no, more like i rarely get to talk to him nor cuddle him ...

Uh, a bit of both i guess. Neither of them seemed convincingly sympathetic [or whatnot] to whatever kind of audience there is. Something lacks and seemed rushed in version 1 ...

AH! *motions for you to come by* *HUGS* Such a butterflies-in-tummies initiator. :D Swear I almost....almost fell for your art boy. Nice job at writing. :) Hats off! =maybe you ...

Hey! Haha. I wasn't really into the whole writer shebang. Not an aspiring one either. I appreciate the critique regarding the punctuations and all. Very observant of you. ;p anyway, ...

It was brillz! x( Awww....not really too brill for anything pro but that definitely was good! I felt how the baleful emptiness of the poem seems true. KEEP WRITING dude! ...

Awww it's sad. But it's lovely. :) Keep writing! And yes it was a good first attempt. Read and review mine :) thanks.

Gyeah like the others have said, characters needed improvement. I sort of looked for the significance of the characters however failed to see em..maybe a lil too flat? oh well, ...

I haven't posted much on here, so I thought I'd do some catching up. This is a story that I just started a few days ago, but the characters were ...