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Re: Doll Face
haha I loved this poem;it had me laughing. Especially at the line, "You’re skinny enough to die." "Doll Face." I thought maybe it was about love or something because of ...
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Re: The Rich Witch
Hello, Sista! I like how you used four rhyme words, had one line to break it up, and then used the very same words again. It was an interesting out-look! ...
May 19, 2015 -
Re: Letter to the weather
I can relate to this poem completely. I love rain, and even though I'm Canadian, it's one of the main reasons I want to go to Ireland. Rain is the ...
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Re: Flatlining
This has an interesting story inside the poem. It is the story of life, the story of death, and the story of living in pain. Every single one of us ...
May 19, 2015 -
Re: What I Could Write?
I really loved this poem, especially the last paragraph. I often hear people say they don't like someone's writing because it is too depressing but even though happy is also ...
May 19, 2015
