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Re: The Things I Do (Chapter 2-2)
Awesome story! a real thriller!! the mood of the entire chapter was so serious...I loved it ^_^ Thenn, everyone was preparing and reading that really kept me up on my ...
Nov 30, 2014 -
Re: Testiculosis, Parts One Through Five
Wow!Shocking actually! ^_^ I don't usually read this kinds of stuff but I could somehow read it for a change. Hell, I do not even know what is testiculosis Lol ...
Nov 30, 2014 -
Re: Chapter 5:The Flesh Assembly
Wow! Good story :-) I really loved your narration ^^~ Skunk burst through the doors of the police station with Officer Fanny Duster and Temaru in tow. The slick white ...
Nov 30, 2014 -
Re: Monster house.
Hey, first of all welcome to YWS ^^ if you need to know absolutely anything just shoot me a PM! I hope you are liking this site so far and ...
Aug 30, 2014 -
Re: Waves
Hmm nice haiku ^^ The structure is good too correct actually But the thing is that wait...let me quote from Wikipedia XD Haiku (俳句) is a very short form of ...
May 19, 2014 -
Re: The Fog Day
Wow :-) I really loved this idea of yours about writing or rather making a poem out of something like a drivers' ed quiz stuff ^_^ The form of the ...
May 6, 2014 -
Re: Witch hunt
Some Psychotic poem you have got there!Brrrrrr ^^ And strangely I could find some sense in it! o.O ( I AM going Bonkers >.>) Anyways XD XD... I ignited a ...
May 5, 2014 -
Re: Forbidden Shadows Chapter Nine
Wow Kitty Action! Meoowwrr! :3 Nice story this one is! I didn't get some parts of it (cos this is where i have started to read this story- chapter 9 ...
May 3, 2014 -
Re: The Adventures of The G.L.R Chapter 3: Em
Intense! Awesome story^^~ I really loved reading this one although I only understood parts of it and at time I even forgot who was who LOL...(Maybe because this is the ...
May 3, 2014 -
Re: Coffee, Grit, and my Dad's Best Shoes 4.5
Nice story^^ I usually don't read romance stuff but I kinda liked this one and was quite okay with this one. It is the first chapter (of this story) that ...
May 3, 2014 -
Re: Morning
BEAUTIFUL poem! XD XD I really like it. The happiest moment is in the silence. This line doesn't feel like the part of the poem because it is so independent- ...
May 2, 2014 -
Re: happy wounds (a redo)
Nice poem ^^ Annndd your avviee is gonna haunt at night today >.< ERZA's here to review by the way :-) This poem really struck me ( in a good ...
May 2, 2014 -
Re: Where I am From
Hey there Welcome to YWS :-) Nice poen by the way ^^ What I liked most was the way how you described and presented about where you came from in ...
May 2, 2014 -
Re: Where I am From
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May 2, 2014
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Re: Pretty Face
Wow thatts quite a different poem you have there! She sounds like a ultra modern sstep mom who wants to get rid of her step daughter as much as subtly ...
May 1, 2014