EPICnumber1

Hi I really like this because the first bit before the story is totally true, I really get where you are comming from with this. I didn't really get the ...

Hi I liked this piece a lot, though the paragraphs are a bit long ,but anyway I enjoyed ever one. I like how it is sort of funny and sometimes ...

Hi and welcome to YWS I hope you enjoy being here ;). I love that first paragraph because we were thrown staight in the action. I read it and I ...

Hi EPICnumber1 here... Right I am going to get straight to the point, you really need to improve the grammer in this because you have put 'am' where you should ...

Hello EPICnumber 1 here... I like this song and I think you have a melody to it as well. The message is clear through out this piece. I like the ...

Hi I am EPICnumber1, Wow I really like this song but I will will have to agree with your other reviews that it is a little repetitive. I really like ...

Hi I am EPICnumber1. I did like this story but there is not enough description in it. You wrote the starting paragraph like you didn't care who knew your secret. ...

Hello I am EPICnumber1 I really like his story but I think you came in with the plot line a little bit too early, It needed to be described more ...

Hi EPICnumber1 here for a review, Hello JParks, Wow so supernatual. I love this story I don't think I have anything to say against it but that you need to ...

Wow I really like this. But there is WAY too much dioluge not that it's a bad thing just that I personally prefer less dioluge and more paragraghs of not ...

I really like this chapter. it builds a kind of connection between the two characters. there are alot of grammer and spelling mistakes. I noticed how you like describing what ...

At first I thought It was the pound but untill right at the end it says "welcome to the zoo". I can see what you are trying to describe but ...