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Hi there. I love the concept you have written about. I understand that she was seeing similarities between her and Adam but i found it a little dramatic that Quinn ...

Hi there. I think your prologue has a lot of potential but from a readers perspective it's quite confusing. You have quite a few mistakes but if you ignore those ...

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Hi there. i Love how in this chapter we get more of a feel for Valarian and fen. I think your story is coming along quite nicely. You have a ...

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Hi there. After reading your creation i think Birkwood has to be a pretty unforgettable character. He's one of the characters that is pretty easy to follow as you read ...

Hi there. I love what you have written. This is the first of your work that i have read but i can confidently say that i think you will go ...

Hi there. This is the first of you work that i have read and i must say it was amazing. i'm going to have to go and read the rest ...

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Hi there. For a first chapter this was really well done. The concept is extremely interesting however moving forward into the story i had a harder time connecting with the ...

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Hi there. I'm going to start off by saying well done. You have written a very promising story. I only have a few minor suggestions for you; Firstly you need ...

Hi there. I love the flower of death. I think that the plot that you have at the moment is really well written. Although i do have a few minor ...

Hi there. After reading your creation i can successfully say that i love it. Your pacing in the actions of who i am assuming is the main character is very ...

Evening firemoons! As far as first chapters go The one you have created for Foreshock is really impressive! The way you have written in the actions and pacing for the ...