DustyFreeman

Wow. Haha, I am sorry. But I actually laughed throughout this whole thing. I think it is pretty amusing, so please don't take it the wrong way. Not down to ...

Okay okay. This is pretty good. I just think that you need to fix your lines a little bit more. You know, work out the words a little. For Instance, ...

Simple word, Amazing. I love how this poem already is. And the swiftness of it makes it appear to stop abruptly, I like that. I actually think that adding to ...

Hey! I love this. It sort of reminds me of Romeo and Juliet! I think the line "So did the feud Between our families." Did that for me! I really ...

I like this a lot! Pretty good, just a few capitalization errors as most have said. But I really do like it. Congrats on the 'comfot zone' leaving. :) It ...

This is amazing! I'm not one t give criticism, but none is needed here. I was a little confused with the rhyme scheme of things, but you gave me a ...

I really like this poem. But it sounds more of a type of . . . 'school poem.' What I mean by that, is it seems like an assignment you ...