Duskglimmer

Thanks, Fontroy. I had alot of fun writing those pieces.

says: prose ( P ) n. 1. Ordinary speech or writing, without metrical structure. 2. Commonplace expression or quality. 3. Roman Catholic Church. A hymn of irregular meter sung before ...

Um... J. Haux... short stories ARE prose... just thought I'd mention that.

And the correct spelling is... LIMERICK. So I did spell it right... *smiles to self*

*nods* but at the same time, if you read the books, they downplay alot of it and focus instead on the characters and the battles. And then of course the ...

Are you serious?! that's funny! I guess great minds think alike :wink:

lol. thanks for reading.

I loved this. The "freezing in the fire" was a really great image for me.

I really like the pre chorus. It sounds like something I would say. Nice Job, Chevy.

Wow. You had me fooled too. But I guess that was the goal. Nice job! I really don't have anything to pick on. It was short and sweet.

This caught me a little off-gaurd when I first read it because it sounded awfully harsh. But upon second reading, I like this. It's amusing.

Just wondering, if you didn't want comments on this, why did you post it? As for the actual poem. Like, Hunter, I didn't notice the rhyming at all. And Lestat ...

I liked this. Short and sweet. Exactly what it needed to be, in my opinion. And I like the image of the circle in the sand and the other person ...

The caps work on the title. They don't work otherwise, it makes everything look the same and hard to read.

You used alot of description and imagery here, which was good. But I never got a clear idea of what you were talking about, so I never really had any ...