Duskglimmer

I haven't read many of them, but I think that Macbeth has to be my favorite so far. I love trying to explain to people that haven't read it that ...

All crits welcome but please be honest , any untrue comments will just mess up my writing block even more . I can't think of a single person on the ...

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*laughs* okay, I'll admit it, the title scared me. But I have a habit of reading the featured stories, so I couldn't let this one go by. And it was ...

If you were trying to get character across through dialouge, it most definately worked. I got two very distinct characters. One, a extremely self-assured powerful person (god?) and the other ...

We sacrifice tremendous joy on the altar of public opinion. I love this line. Flat out, plain and simple, I love it. It's a great image and it's going to ...

*blinks* To put Jigsaw's words into a more polite form: Reading long pieces on the computer is hard. It makes it a whole lot easier if you put an extra ...

But even then, in Its destruction, It shall be a monument of hope. This is a really excellent line. I love it. And I was pleasantly surprised to find someone ...

*singsoffkey* I adore you. Honestly, I do. I don't know why you don't write more stuff like this. It rocks all the awesome socks in target (and I'm dead serious ...

This was an interesting concept, but as people said, it needs some revision. I froze , directly in front of me were two eyes , they were a revolting mix ...

I'm beginning to really enjoy the style in which you write your stories. I'm not sure whether it's just because you're exploring ideas or what, but it almost has a ...

Ooo... I'm glad to see that you posted this up here... It's more likely that I'd read it here than on the YWG because I spend so much time here... ...

I am really bad at critiquing poetry, so I usually don't even take the time to comment on them around the YWS, but I just needed to stop in and ...

Not sure I get the title on this, but it made me laugh. I really only had two complaints: 1) “Dave’s a pretty smart guy, though,” Prick muses, taking a ...

Well... first of all, all the questions at the end show that you've got a lot of loose ends to tie up. I hope you have an idea of how ...