Ducati

Hi, I thought your poem had a really great message and it spoke to me. But one fairly major thing...does it really have to rhyme on almost every single line? ...

People have probably done the nitpicks, but I like that stuff so bare with me Alanis scrambles up the latter ladder after her. She tiptoes to the edge of the ...

Dracula by Bram Stoker was better than any books I've read of Anne Rice and Stephanie Meyer. Interview with a vampire was goodish, but I find her style of writing ...

I don't think its true, yet of course it may be since truths are just truths to those whom believe Is it whom? My who/whom sense if terrible. But it ...

Right, I feel totally underqualified, but I'm a fool with an internet connection, so I'll review it. if only I could scream louder, she thought to herself, they might know ...

We had been laying on my bed in silence for 10 or 15 minutes. I could feel the mattress moving slightly with his breaths. This just sounds odd. Try breathing. ...

It sucks!!!!!! Just kidding, it does in no way suck. But then, if it did, I wouldn't say so... I sit at my piano And the music starts to flow ...

I'm all for free verse, but this just sounds like a rant, even worse...a coherent rant. Do you know how angry I feel? No, I don't. And you just made ...

Romanticism in full swing IRight off I'm confused because the first line seems like it wants to say romanticism is in full swing, which would put me in the time ...

I might be harsh, but it's for your own good :D A Never Ending Pain It’s eating away at my soul. My heart, becoming black like coal. The comma is ...

First off, I'm really not a dog person. At all. Soft, bristly fur Rubs my arm. A soft breath from a set of lungs Encased in a torso that sits ...

First off, the mother is awesome. I love the dialogue. Reminds me of, well I can't quite remember. BUt of something very funny. With that, she burst into melodramatic tears. ...

Wind blows across the rain-slick street, sliding through my open coat. I shiver but don't zip it up; it makes me look fat. Instead, I hunch my shoulders, put my ...

She wasn’t going to get pregnant. She wasn’t ever going to get pregnant. I think couldn't get pregnant is clearer. The opening lines confused me as to if his wanted ...

Hi, I've been summoned here to review for you. It's a bit long for a line by line, but I will point a few off sounding sentences. Valentina’s silvery voice ...