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Holdin' it down
It's short, sorry. I don't know if people will get it or not. I’m holdin’ it down. Writing my timesheet, pen slips off- squealing Smiling in the corridor arms start ...
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Doll
Hope this is the right place. I didn't mean to post another poem so soon after I posted one, but I had a conversation that made me want to right ...
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Untitled, chapter 1
This is the first chapter, quite short but I hope it grabs your attention. If you hate it, tell me. If you don't, please tell me also. All I could ...
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Tell me I'm beautiful
Tell me I’m beautiful, And feed My appetites. Hold me Gently, And kiss me, Roughly. Desire me Softly, And deny me With force. Hate me For nothing, And love me ...
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Pack
I wasn't sure of Tv show formatting, but this is the first episode. Please read it, even if it totally pisses you off. Basically it's a teen show, so the ...
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Thursday Next Series: The Eyre Affair, Lost in a good book..
These books are great for anyone who loves reading and writing and well, books! Summary of the Eyre affair (extract from In 1985 time travel and cloning are a consistent ...
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Captured
I'm not really sure what to call it. This part takes place in the present, and other parts of the story are the past. But it goes back to this ...
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Sister
You are so substantial; you fill up their hearts and my face is darkened by your shadow. I am so fragile flitting in the wind, your hug holds me down ...
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Influence Chapter 1
I'm particulary looking for weaknesses in description and moving around action type stuff. Just basically need help, I'm bad at starting stories off; want to get the good bit-well this ...
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I never had somebody
I went through I rough patch a few years back. This is how I felt then, not now. So don't worry about me I never had somebody Don’t think I ...
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Jimmy
The edited version I have posted below. Please review that. Thankyou. Short story at the moment, I wrote something similar on a creative writing camp, but I'm think maybe I ...
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Disenchanted
Edited version further below, you can review that or this, what ever you like If oceans were not infinitely deep and horizons just a figment of my eye if art ...
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Sick Puppy
I don’t know why I was staring at her. Usually, I didn’t look at anyone in particular as I lent against the bar; I just unfocused my eyes and let ...
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Sick Puppy part 2
This basically takes off from where I left off, and it's a bit more mellow. But if you stick with, me, it'll get more exciting Please tell me if it's ...
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Sick Puppy part 3
I don't know how to make the previous works go up the hopefully you can find them somehow or have already read them... By the way, these aren't separate chapters. ...
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Synchronicity
Right, please tell me up front if you think this is garbage. I can't really see it very well objectively. I know you got to get rid of 80% of ...
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Saving Smiles
When I’m watching TV and I start to smile With the corners of my mouth and my eyes I have to stop myself It’s true This smile’s not for me, ...
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Don't look back
I know this is far from perfect but I really like the idea so I need some help! Inside me there’s a knot of dread, Echoing softly in my head. ...
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Guess the name
Gosh, I just felt that I had to write something. The heat is frying my brain and making me write crazy things though. Hope it's not too terrible. Casually tiptoeing ...
