DreamyMoon

Well I gotta say i really love this poem. You hear the title and think, oh yeah love, i've heard them all, Yet i like the way this poem concentrates ...

You know what :) I liked that It was short yet emotive and the language was nothing complex but thats why it was attention gripping and real. It leaves the ...

Wow is all i have to say tbh That was really really good, it kept me drawn in, and my mind totally picked up where breaking dawn had left off ...

Its really good, and totally catches my interest in liek the first line =] Is it about dreaming by anychance because thts the way i interperet it? Not gunna comment ...

I think this is totally lovely, the dreamyness and lardy da ness of t is great. It's serious but lighthearted at the same time, i also like the way each ...

Wow This poem is really good, i'm not gunna bother about the punctuation etc in it tbh becsause im more concerned about the message, the image and the emotions you ...

Yeah i really like this poem mainly because it has the word dream in Cos at the end of the day i think poetry is all about dreaming, its putting ...

Ahh i like this poem It really captures alot And the structure is good, the way you keep the words "They laughed" I think really emphasizes the actions. =] Like ...

I think this is very god I like the way it captures the smaller things in life, all the little thihngs tht make up the bigger picture =] Its gooood ...

I think this poem really catches that feeling that is hard to describe when you fall for someone that hard. ''Twirled like a leaf in the breeze.'' I really like ...

Well personally i thought that was amazing I think the perspective you are putting on death as it not being a final end and instead a bringing perhaps of people ...