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DreamyAlice

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  • Poetry » Literature, Realistic Re: The Path of Youth

    Thanks for the review!!!!

    Jun 19, 2022
  • Poetry » Literature, Realistic Re: The Path of Youth

    Thanks for the review:)

    Jun 19, 2022
  • Poetry » Literature, Realistic Re: The Path of Youth

    I didn't give much detail so that the reader could have their interpretation but yeah I think I should elaborate it a bit XD

    Jun 18, 2022
  • Poetry » Literature, Realistic Re: The Path of Youth

    Thank you lliyah for giving my poem a read, it means a lot. And yeah you gave me some really good advices, I will try to work on it and ...

    Jun 18, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Health Re: The Rosemary Center: Chapter 1

    I am glad my suggestion helped!

    Sep 6, 2021
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: dragon art

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    Sep 5, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Eclipse: Chapter 10

    The story is developing really interesting! Going to read the next chapter!

    Sep 3, 2021
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The Holy Spring - Part 1

    XD Mailice I thought the same thing but 'glowers' and 'farden' were purposefully written by Wolfi cause the man is drunk!

    Sep 2, 2021
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The Holy Spring - Part 1

    XD oh yeah why didn't it came to my mind!

    Sep 2, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: Sky of Seasons Chapter-1.4

    Thanks for reading my works and reviewing them. It means a lot!

    Jul 18, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: Sky of Seasons Chapter-2.1

    Oh Thanks for the time you took to review this!

    Jul 18, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: Sky of Seasons Chapter-2.2

    Thanks

    Jul 18, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: Sky of Seasons Chapter- 3.1

    Yeah! It's my first story and it's a shame that I have never even written a short story. Actually I got into writing after I joined YWS

    Jul 10, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: Sky of Seasons Chapter- 3.1

    Thanks for the review Malice. And again out of my excitement I made mistakes. Well....I have................. thought about it last night. There are way too many points in here. :D ...

    Jul 10, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: Sky of Seasons Chapter-2.3

    Well but I think "soleless" is correct too. Maybe because of regional language differences. meaning&rlz=1C1CHBF_enIN879IN879&oq=soleless &aqs=chrome.1.69i57j0i20i263j0l8.5386j0j7&sourceid=chrome&ie=UT

    Jul 10, 2021


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