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DreamyAlice

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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Lost Dragon 1.2

    Hey Alice here to give a review! I am loving it already and the best part is that I don't need to wait for the next chapters to be published ...

    Jan 7, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Lost Dragon 1.1

    Hey Alice here to review! This is not in the green room now but the other chapters of it are there and I wanted to read them so I started ...

    Jan 6, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Action / Adventure Re: The Last City: Chapter 1

    Hey Alice here to review. I think the suspense is really cool and interesting we don't know where this story will went there are lot of possibilities for this story ...

    Jan 5, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Camp Tornado: Part Three

    Hey Alice here to review! As I said in the previous chapter review the story is growing more interesting .And my favorite character is ofcourse Talia I like her adventurous ...

    Jan 5, 2021
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: What do I do?

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    Hey Majesty your poem is still lingering in the green room I am here to free it as everyone has commented on it no one has reviewed it so I ...

    Jan 3, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Realistic Re: sister, sister, (3)

    Hey looks like your work has suffered in the green room for a long time I am gonna free it by reviewing. So lets start! First of all your writing ...

    Jan 2, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Legend of Ikor, Chapter 3, The Dragon

    Hey Yoshikrab Alice here to review the third and the most fun chapter of the legend of Ikor. (Laughing) XD This is the only thing I can say about this ...

    Jan 2, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Narrative Re: The Legend of Ikor, Chapter 2, The Wizard

    "Alright! Second part done! Feedback is greatly appreciated and would motivate me into writing more! I'm already working on the next one! (It'll be about a dragon!)" Don't you worry ...

    Jan 2, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Tree Girl Chapter 8

    Lets get into today's first review!!!!! Alice thinks its nice that you wrote something else instead of the usual adventures of beyond the fence. For sure I am not able ...

    Jan 1, 2021
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Beauty of the Night

    Lets get into today's review!!! ~~~ Plot ~~~ It is quite a unique poem because normally people describe day as beautiful, warm and all the other pretty words as you ...

    Dec 31, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Other Re: I am Mari (Chapter 3)

    Momo I loved it! Alice thinks the sidekick is the one you wanted the name of in the forum. I am curious to know what name you choosed for him. ...

    Dec 30, 2020
  • Article / Essay » Spiritual, General Re: the christmas musings of a muslim

    There is no mistake in this essay it is so well written. And just like Mage I also loved this particular passage "I see my Christian counterparts decorate their homes, ...

    Dec 27, 2020
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Dramatic Re: Dear Anne

    Hi Ailah! Alice think it is wonderfully written and the suspense is really cool. The letter format is so unique and its impactful than writing it simply. Like Andrew said ...

    Dec 27, 2020
  • Short Story » Horror, Other Re: Silenced Night

    Alice think it was a very mysterious story. There was no clue what was going to come. I thought it would be all nice and pleasant but never knew the ...

    Dec 19, 2020
  • Poetry » Romantic, Narrative Re: In Love

    Alice think it was so heartfelt and gentle. I fell in love with your words. I loved the repeating lines. And if it touched me I just know it would ...

    Dec 18, 2020


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