Dreamy

Hello there, Roundsquare (a very interesting name btw) This will be a short review. I enjoyed reading this chapter. It was very well-written. The descriptions made the scenes feel lively. ...

Hello there! Dreamy here to give a quick and a short review. I read in your description that you couldn't believe you're still writing this story, I'd say KEEP GOING. ...

Hello silvermoon17! If I remember correctly, part 1 ended with the kids rising a not-so-friendly spirit. So I thought part 2 will be about the spirit. But lo behold! I ...

Hello there! A good first chapter, I'd say. I liked how you maintained air of mystery throughout the chapter, it served well without being too much. Though there were few ...

Hello there! Boy oh boy, was this long. >.> First of all, I'd suggest you to post the chapters separately instead of posting it all in one single huge post. ...

Hello there, Anu. The title intrigued me and that's how I came to read the story. I must say you have a wonderful way of conveying your story. You had ...

Hello there, Faery. This must be the shortest reviews I've written. Such a short prose yet it captured me. This part was an wonderful introduction to however the story follows. ...

Hi! Ok, that was an interesting. Just the other day I was talking about how there are not enough scripts in here and voila! I write script myself, and I ...

Hey Liberty! It seems like you're already made changes to the chapters with Eternal's reviews, that's awesome because it reads really well. The writing flowed very well. Though, there are ...

Hey there! Definitely an interesting piece of work. What I really liked about this was the description of the surroundings. I have read few works where the writer focuses all ...

Hi there, LordWolf. You might remember me from reviewing the part one of this chapter, as I said in that review, I wanted to know more of their story so ...

Wow! Sex! When I wrote my first sex scene I was so afraid to post it on YWS. You're my hero. Now, I hope you forgive me for randomly reviewing ...

Hi! Interesting story. I liked how you maintained the sense of mystery throughout the story and only letting the readers know the immediate details of the characters. Like, how some ...

NOOOOOOOOOO, WHO IS IT? Hi. This was a very interesting chapter though this is the first one I'm reading from the novel. And because of which I'm thinking the MC ...

Heyy! Fantastic opening for a novel. I haven't read a first chapter of a novel with so much happening all at once. Usually, it's always just commentary about the characters ...