Dreamworx95

Hehehe, this was hilarious! I love reading these thingies, they're much better than stories. One of my favorite parts was this: Superman: At least I have a book written about ...

Two words: LOVE IT. It's pure genius. Fav part: EDWARD: Yeah, but I scintillate. SNOINK: Ooooooooh. It’s Christmas time! SHINY. Priceless and hilarious. This totally made my day. You absolutely ...

The ache in my head starts to recede. I’m unsteady, I’m trembling, but now that I’m up, I think I can stand on my own. I think you should add ...

Sorry it's been almost forever since I've written a review for this, but I'm here now! So here it is. He sat upright and raised his arms, stretching his back, ...

His hair had darkened to a rich brown, his chiseled face was tan from the summer sun which set off his smoldering brown eyes. His nose was slightly bent and ...

A grassy knoll sprouted a green lushness that only summers in Aireslertt could produce. The grass seemed to whisper with pleasure as the breeze that carried a touch of cool ...

I'm back again and on chapter two of your wonderful story! It keeps getting better and better. “That may be so,” says Koreth quietly, “that may be so, but...” he ...

I'm so sorry I haven't been reviewing your work. I know that you've already posted your eighteenth chapter, but I really don't like jumping ahead in a story without reading ...

The first paragraph was a great way to start off the chapter. I think the reader can really visualize the setting. You did a great job of using the senses ...

It was a Friday afternoon when Harvey Forest first strolled into his life. In this sentence, it sounds like Harvey Forest is strolling into his own life. I think you ...

Hmmm.....interesting. But Edward doesn't sound like Edward at all. That's the thing I don't like about fanfiction. I would really like to know more abou this Andrew Ravenwood fellow, though. ...

The blood pounding in my ears drowns out the screech of the dragon’s roar and sends ice running, running through me.[/i] I think I understand what you were trying to ...

Damn, this is really good! Had me hooked all the way to the end. Finally, someone is making a story out of us loners! I feel so honored now. Apart ...

But sadly my thoughts became interrupted. My thoughts WERE interrupted. My red eyes scanned the area, not much was to be seen, hell didn’t look that odd. My red eyes ...

Finally! This story is going somewhere. Okay so I'll start with the good stuff, bad stuff later. There are a lot of good word choices here, like I said before, ...