Dream_Catcher

very simple and almost comical. i believe that was your purpose. ultimately a 'cute' poem. not too much i can say against it. good one! :)

very well written and very realistic. I can feel the narrators pain and dilemma. Very well written and I like the simple style it accentuates the emotion. very nice!

well i can say for sure that i like this poem more than 'Time'. I can connect to the actual situation of the poem more and know how the narrator ...

Thank you roon for the excellent review. I have gotten mixed thoughts on this in the past as well. I love the idea of the piece but I want everything ...

very simple and yet very well written and meaningful in only a few words. simply a very good work.

Thank you both for your reviews. I appreciate your compliments and am glad that the poem could affect you in a powerful way. Mr. Knightley I will consider your title ...

ultimately the poem is very elementary.

just a little cliche though i know where you are coming from with it. I can relate in that there aren't too many 'good' guys around and its hard to ...

Jetpack, you're exactly right. This is a rough draft and all, though I've written about 7 chapters more than this. I have fallen in love with the concept I just ...