DreamWork

Thanks for review^^.I really appreciate it.Well,yeah.you re right.I just wrote what I know about beauty.Of course beauty meant so much.More that what you can express here in poem :D

Thanks,glad you like it^^.yeah,I will fix it soon :)

thanks,glad you like it.I think so,yeah i will fix it soon :D

My pleasure :D

haha,na,but people think the first stanza is quiet 'weird ' too.BTW,why you not allowed to eat ice cream?O.o

Thanks for review^^.Ice cream also beautiful 's now colorful with different taste in it!Glad you like this :)

Thank for review,actually I think about that too,but not sure if that was right or not^^.thanks for show me here.I do really struggling with grammar.Even in my writing book,there are ...

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Thanks for review^^.Well,I love messy with colours,sorry for that :)

nah,monsters I mean this one; e.g:%u201Cgummy hatred%u201D: what is that? Is hatred ever gummy? "-->it just a simile,of course hatred not gummy^^.Sorry,i dont mean to say that. :)

XD,well,I think you misunderstood the real meaning here.I am not talking about spider-man,but something as a representative here.I wrote this for my enemies by the way :D Thanks for review

thanks a lot,I really appreciate it :D

haha.Thanks for review^^,I really appreciate it :D

Thanks my dear friend :D. :hug:

He doing a great job,just need some more originality and creativity :D Keep it up @Malachi ^^